बस यूँही……….

Sunsets are always pretty. The day’s tiring journey comes to an end for a well deserved rest, leaving behind a collage of memories. Good and bad, happy and sad. My thoughts on being witness to this sublime sunset on Saturday coalesced into a few lines
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C’est la vie….
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At sunset the fiery orb descends to rest
On western horizons, darkness is imbued
With the chiaroscuro of a gentle, ethereal nest
As rainclouds gather, memories crowd my mood
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The day’s events, a jumble in my mind
A kaleidoscope of joy and sorrow’s find
The sun, refreshed, shall rise with morning’s prime
But memories’ weight, alas, shall never unwind
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For time, a thief, steals moments, swift as flight
Leaving us with recollections, bittersweet and bright
Yet still we cherish them, though they bring us pain
For in their depths, our lives are lived, and love doth reign
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C’est la vie, indeed, a truth we must confess
Embracing life’s complexities, we find our happiness.
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I’ve followed the traditional Shakespearean sonnet structure, with a rhyme scheme and iambic pentameter. The sonnet explores the idea of the sun setting, and the memories of the day crowding the mind, with the acceptance that the burden of memories never lightens, but we cherish them anyway, as they make up our lives and experiences.
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22 responses to “बस यूँही……….”

  1. karunagirishbh Avatar
    karunagirishbh

    very Nice ..

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  2. डूबते आफताब के साथ तेरी यादों का समंदर उतर आया,
    फिर ठंडी हवा क्या चली तेरे खयालों से ही दिल भर आया,
    तन्हाई में सुकून कैसा,तेरी आगोश में फिर जीने का मन कर आया….

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  3. Madhuri Thakar Avatar
    Madhuri Thakar

    दिनकरा..

    तुझ्या येण्याने अन् गमनाने

    मनाची आंदोलनं

    कमी होतात,वाढतातही..

    जगण्याचं बळ अन् कळ सोसण्याची

    नवी दिशा देतोस हे मात्र सत्य!

    धन्यवाद

    सुरेख,मनाला अंतर्मुख करणारा फोटो, शेर साठी..

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  4. Beautiful PC and lines.

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  5. Beautiful picture & lines.

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  6. वाह…

    Beautiful photograph….

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  7. Gourishankar Hiremath Avatar
    Gourishankar Hiremath

    Beautiful Sonnet sir!! The bard would be proud of you!

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  8. Click : awesome !!
    Couplet : bahot khoob !!
    Lines : Superb !!

    ” roj hai dubana tuze, kasak to dil me tere hoti hogi…
    Phir seher me aana hai, ye baat tuze sukoon deti hogi..
    ae-aaftaab, kaise bhulungi mehboob se mere bichadane ki vo sham dard-bhari…
    Tu hi bata, kya yaad unhe bhi meri aati hogi…
    har subah ki kiran teri, hoti hai umeed-bhari..
    Kab aayegi vo sham, degi muze unn ke aane ki khabar, jadubhari…” Shibaa

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  9. Trupti Jee,

    As usual… Nice lines and again as usual please allow me to respond….

    उठती कसक का गिला नहीं,डूबना तो है आदत मेरी,
    सुकून की परवा किसे,सहर होते उगना है फितरत मेरी,
    आफताब हूं,देखता हूं रोज बिछड़े युगल और वो शाम दर्द भरी,
    हां,है इधर भी और उधर भी, भीगी पलकें तन्हाई भरी,
    उगता भी उस आश में हुं,कोई बैठा है आश लगाए उम्मीद भरी,
    काश,कोई शाम ऐसी हो जब मिल जाए उसे वो झप्पी जादू भरी…

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    1. 🙂🙂 Daxay ji, Mai bas koshish karati hoon kuch likhne ki🙏🏻 aap Jo respond me likhate ho, hamesha hi behatarin hi nahi, awwal hi hota hai.. Muze to aapka shukriya ada karana chahiye. Aur Doctor sahab ka.. Dr. Sahab ki vajah se yaha bahot hi sikhne ko milta hai, acche logo’n ke vichar bhi padhne milate hai, jo ki mere jaise logo’n ke liye vardaan hi hai.. Sabhi reply karnewale , sabhi members KO mera pranaam, dil se..

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  10. Trupti Jee,
    Thank you for your kind words.. And…

    “गर ये आपका आगाज़ है तो पता नहीं अंदाज़ क्या होगा?”

    Anyway, I’ve been always grateful to Dr. ABC for providing such platform where we all can exchange views (sorry to say I am unable to understand Marathi much) but anyway…
    We all are lucky to have such wonderful platform and Thank You again….

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